Weekend Writing Warriors #59 – Revenant (Part 98)

Hello all and welcome the latest snippet from the ongoing story of Revenant. As always, these sentences carry on immediately from last week so if you want to see what has come before then just follow this link.


    Ryan entered the stairwell, where Marcus waited with his gun held at the ready. The pair carefully negotiated the stairs to the ground floor, pausing to confirm the entryway was clear before they stepped out onto the foyer. The area looked exactly as Ryan remembered from his previous visit.
    “You’ve been here before. Which way should we go?”
    “My last trip wasn’t a sightseeing tour. We just got in and out as quick as we could.”
    “In and out eh?” Marcus said. “That sounds about right. You know, that hot doctor is entirely wasted on you. She needs a man who cares enough to take his time.” Even with the visor completely covering Marcus’ face Ryan could feel the man’s lascivious grin.
    Ryan sighed. “Let’s start with the East Wing.”


I hope you’ve enjoyed my contribution to this week’s list, and thanks for stopping by. Click on the image below to see all the wonderful writers who are taking part in this weekly event. weekend-warriors

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7 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors #59 – Revenant (Part 98)”

  1. I’m with Ryan, Marcus’s comment doesn’t require a response. Why do I have a feeling ole Marcus may not make it through this expedition? He reminds me of Hudson from Aliens LOL. Another great snippet!

  2. Marcus is an @$$! Ryan is right in not acknowledging his crude remarks. (The word exactly appears twice fairly close together…it pulled me out of the story a bit, just letting you know 😉

  3. Ah, Marcus. Thinking with the wrong head again. 🙂 Nice snippet, Goran. I’d change “She needs a man who cares enough to take their time” to “…who cares enough to take his time.” Love this story. 🙂

      1. You’re welcome, Goran. Your story is really fun and intense. BTW, on an upcoming blog post (tomorrow) I mention you and this story specifically. I’ll post the link on Twitter and FB when I have it. 🙂

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