Six Sentence Sunday #40 – Revenant (Part 20)

For the last twenty weeks, you’ve walked with Ryan through the zombie filled passages of the Colony ship Francis Drake in search for one Doctor Kassandra Evans. A woman that could hold the key to allowing humanity to return to Earth. Twenty weeks at the (agonisingly) slow pace of 6 sentences per week. I thank you for your patience and your feedback.

There’s still a long way to go in this story, but with twenty weeks being something of a milestone I thought I’d share some stats with where Revenant is at right now.

  • 2123 words
  • 58 paragraphs
  • 120 sentences

These six sentences pick up immediately following last week’s six, so if you want to catch up or need a recap then just follow this link.

Here we go…

    A husk leapt from the platform above. It crashed heavily onto Ryan’s back, knocking him to the floor. He struggled to push himself up, but a series of heavy blows sent him down again. His gun was useless with the creature on his back, so he rolled from side to side succeeding only in flipping around to face it. Fists rained down on his chest and hammered his helmet. His armour sorely tested by every blow.

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10 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday #40 – Revenant (Part 20)”

  1. Very interesting to see how far Ryan has come. I like your action sequences very much, you avoid cheap effects, and steer clear of monster clichés. Well done. Hang in there, Ryan!

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