Six Sentence Sunday #38 – Revenant (Part 18)

Has it been a week already? Sunday is upon us and the next Six Sentences of Ryan’s stress filled exploration of the Derelict Colony Ship – The Francis Drake – continues.

These six sentences pick up immediately following last week’s six, so if you want to catch up or need a recap then just follow this link.

Here it is…

    Just forty paces, separated Ryan from his goal. Rows of cylindrical cryo-chambers lined the walls, stacked five levels high to his left and right, like coffins in some ancient mausoleum.
    A husk leapt from a platform above him.
    Ryan raised his gun, aimed, and fired, vaporizing the mindless creature before it hit the ground.
    Ten paces down, thirty to go.

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5 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday #38 – Revenant (Part 18)”

  1. I’m on the proverbial “pins and needles!” Rooting for Ryan like a goofy teenaged cheerleader. Go. Ryan. Go. Fab Six!!!

  2. This is gonna be an uphill battle for Ryan *and* us. Yes! Masterful tension in this series, Goran.

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