I’ve been getting many encouraging comments from the last few sixes so I’ve decided to continue with examples from my current WIP, The Grandfather’s Blades. This is a scene involving Tara, who also featured in Six Sentence Sunday #5.
“Listen lady, I don’t know you, and I’m not interested in waiting any longer. He’s used up all his chances, so unless you can pay me right now, he’s shit outta luck.”
Interesting. In her experience, most men would’ve requested an ‘alternative’ form of payment. That he didn’t, suggests he’s a professional. The threat level just went up. “I can’t let you kill him.”
“Then we’re going to have a problem.”
I should probably get round to doing a six that actually includes the main characters in the story, but I’m having too much fund with these. 🙂
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